Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Batty's Move--Claire's Fantasy Story

"Batty!" called Mrs. McBat. Batty flew in. Mr. McBat and Mrs. McBat had a smile on their faces. Mrs. McBat had called Batty's brothers and sisters too: Bell, Benny, and Beans. MR. McBat announced they would be moving to Bannasburg. Batty started feeling uneasy. She loved Singapore and her best friends Isabelle and Rachel. But, she felt better quickly, and she started looking forward to moving to Bannasburg. For months she had been the center of attention because she was the oldest of 3 bats, by the time she was seven. She was moving to Bannasbug, South Africa when she was eight. Before she knew it, she was at the airport. She felt uneasy again, and wanted to zoom back to Singapore. But all of the sudden, she heard on the speaker that it was time for boarding to Bannasburg. She knew she had to board, so she made the choice to move on. After the hours on the aircraft, they landed.

Batty immediately felt sick and threw up. The same feeling came over her and she did it again and again. After finishing throwing up, she was five minutes away from fainting. But she pulled threw and drove out of the airport .and raced to the van and plopped in a back seat .She was being drove to her temporary house .lets say all went well and she has three friends named Olivia ,Joanna and Kim .

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